Step 1: Focus Identification: Before reading, highlight the specific subject the question asks you to summarise. This ensures that every piece of evidence selected is relevant to the marks available.
Step 2: Comparative Scanning: Scan both texts simultaneously to find 'matching' or 'clashing' details. For example, if the focus is 'the weather,' look for how both writers describe the atmosphere and what those descriptions imply about their safety.
Step 3: Drafting with Discourse Markers: Use comparative transitions such as 'Similarly,' 'In contrast,' or 'Conversely' to link the two sources. This demonstrates to the examiner that you are synthesising information rather than writing two separate mini-essays.
Step 4: Evidence Integration: Embed short, punchy quotations directly into your sentences. A model answer avoids long block quotes, instead using 'micro-quotes' to support specific inferential leaps.
Level 3 (Clear/Relevant): A Level 3 response identifies clear differences and provides relevant explanations. It shows a solid understanding of what is happening in both texts but may stay closer to the surface meaning.
Level 4 (Perceptive/Detailed): A Level 4 response offers 'perceptive' analysis, meaning it finds original or subtle insights that aren't immediately obvious. It often explores the 'nuance' of a writer's perspective.
| Feature | Level 3 Response | Level 4 Response |
|---|---|---|
| Inference | Clear and logical | Perceptive and multi-layered |
| Synthesis | Identifies obvious differences | Explores subtle conceptual links |
| Evidence | Relevant supporting quotes | Wide range of integrated references |
| Interpretation | Explains the 'what' | Explores the 'why' and 'how' |
The 'One-Sided' Trap: Students often write extensively about one source and only a sentence or two about the other. To achieve Level 3 or above, both texts must be addressed with relatively equal weight.
Feature Spotting: A common mistake is identifying a language feature (e.g., 'the writer uses an adjective') instead of focusing on the information and ideas. This question is about what you understand, not how the writer wrote it.
Paraphrasing vs. Inferring: Simply rewriting the text in your own words is paraphrasing. To infer, you must explain what the text suggests about a character's feelings, a situation's danger, or a setting's atmosphere.